Went went well?
- I found giving each image a succinct, detailed description easy because I had to do it a lot in history of art at school. I think that this is rally important to just give a sense of each of the works before I went on to analyse them.
- I also think that I have used I good selection of images to analyse. I think that the Pop Art example works really well to both tie the other works together and challenge the opinions of the writers.
What challenges did I face and what could I have done better?
- I struggled to tie my three image analyses together and ended up analysing them separately. This was because if I were to analyse them together I wasn't sure where to put the descriptions of each of the works. i couldn't put them all at the beginning. I was going to try to rearrange the essay but it just became to confusing with the references, so I have just left it and am going to wait for feedback.
- I was really unsure about in text citations and where they are necessary. I have put them in for all of the writers but I wan't sure if I needed them for factual information about the images. I am also going to wait for feedback on this because it is too late to ask.
- Lastly, I think that I could have spoken about some of my writers, like Fearon and Read more. I think that I maybe put too much focus on Brody because his opinions allowed me to raise the most interesting points about my images. Maybe I could have found another writer?
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